Friday, January 23, 2009

The Famous chocolate bar by:Lydia

Once upon a time, their was a girl. She loved chocolate. She said " when I grow up I'm going to make the yummiest chocolate bar ever!" Her brothers and sisters were like yeah right. She began as a teenager. She tried making a nut bar,but it didn't end up right. But with chocolate she began to make a chocolate bar, it turned out just right. Soon she had a shop, with a bunch and a bunch of chocolate. Usually people come in the afternoon. Soon she was on T.V., and her family was so proud of her. Soon she was very very famous, they called her the famous chocolate woman. All just because of the famous chocolate bar The End

1 comment:

  1. You're really good at this writing thing. Do you enjoy it? Very nice nice short story.

    I read it aloud to my four year old daughter and she commented that she would like to try that chocolate bar herself. :)